How many sections? 7 ? I think 4 of them are genius! The opening is among the best. Brooks’ voice is killer. There’s some seriously good indie rock happening on this track. Unfortunately the competition is high and little mistakes are very costly. My biggest problem with this track was the drums. Not so much that they were fake drums, more that they weren’t changing with the rest of the music they way they should. Sometimes groove was lost. Also, I don’t feel the composition as a whole flowed nicely or logically. I was left feeling very random. Also, the ending felt like a stop rather than an ending. I heavily suggest submitting some Nein songs!

I can tell you're thriving on this challenge. I've gotta admit I love the way this starts and then gradually dig it less as it goes on, I like most of the changes, but the jangly chords and riffs in the first 30 seconds are easily the coolest bit. Purely on a technical level, I think you need to sort out the phrasing of your lyrics, in the first section it sounds like your freestyling it completely, this is one aspect of the song that improves significantly as it progresses. You've made judging this thing really hard because you have lots of good ideas, but i think they way you turn them into a song has room for improvement.