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Deified
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Entry from Deified in Nur Ein XVII.

Use a palindromic musical phrase of at least 6 notes total (melody must be a palindrome but rhythm can change)

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Deified
by The Alleviators

Challenge notes: Just in case anyone cares... song is in D and the palindrome is A-B-C#-D-F#-F#-D-C#-B-A - appears in the intro, between first chorus and second verse, and outro over the I chord (sometimes with harmonized thirds), during the first line of second verse over the IV chord and at the end of each chorus ("if you didn't want to be deified..." and "never wanted to be deified...") over an underlying I-vi-IV-V.

Lyrics
It's a slow burn, heel turn goodwill assassin
Our Greek chorus can't see the forest for the fashion

We sent prayers to the towers
And we watched from afar
You kicked the doors open
And you left them ajar

You don't know me and I
Don't know if you'd much like me if you did
If you didn't want to be deified
You should shine with a dimmer saintly light

It's a given, that I'm livin' for the payoff
Serotonin, in a button, never enough

So send me your prayers
And I'll try to be kind
But I can't save your souls, no
I can't even save mine

You don't know me and I
Don't know if you'd much like me if you did
Never wanted to be deified
But I'll bask in your praises here tonight

Reviews

2 posted notes

vowlvom

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this sounds gorgeous, really warm guitar sound and the harmonics and tremolo e-piano are perfect additions. Really nice palindromic riff and good vocal performances. Lyrics are poetic and interesting. Only real critique is that the drums and guitar could feel a little more locked-in in places, I particularly noticed this in the outro. One of my favourites of the round.

furrypedro

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The intro to this is a great example of how to hit my buttons with a slower number. The guitars all throughout are glorious here, both the folky bits and the post-rock electric guitar twinkles. When the chorus hits I was a little disappointed first time as it descends into fairly generic ploddy slow rock. It does improve with repeated listens thanks to the strong melodies and tasteful lyrics, but I would have perhaps preferred if you'd have stuck with minimalist percussion for this track as I feel the on-beat snare drum contributes to the rather wearisome rhythm. That one gripe aside, the performances here are spot on and there isn't a hint of the amateurism that can often weigh down SF/NE related songwriting. Really good job.

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