Great, great mix. The endless guitar noodling gets a bit grating. The melody gets a bit samey. Falsetto-y backup vocals and lead vocals don't quite sound good together. This is actually a downside of the great mix; it would never have been that obvious if things had bled into each other more. Nice use of title, I like the lyrics you built around it. The challenge is very, very understated here; it's actually more of a very very busy arrangement than truly cacophonic. Points off for that. Hmm, and it's pretty drawn out, too. Vocals sound a bit strainy. All in all, this fails to hold my interest.

Some lines I really dug, while other made me go "meh". The music & vocals were well done. I've complained a lot about 5 minute + songs recently. This has been one of the few to hold my attention throughout, but honestly even it could be shortened.

This is a dull song that fails the challenge.