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Partly Fiction
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Entry from Partly Fiction in Nur Ein XVIII.

List Song

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Partly Fiction
by glennny

verses and lists keep to this hexameter pattern:
(a feminine caesura used by Homer in the Iliad. An example occurs in Iliad 1.5)
| Spondee | Dactyl | Spondee | Dactyl | Dactyl | Spondee|

| _ _ | _ uu| _ _ | _ uu |_uu| _ _ |

Verse One in 11/8
Are we in trouble?
Can we watch movies
perusing
Your list:

(Movies List in 4/4)
Nashville, Goodfellas, Duck Soup,
Deer Hunter, Blade Runner, High Noon,
Snow White, Titanic, Ben-Hur,
Affliction, Pulp Fiction, Network

Verse Two in 11/8
she knows my struggle
it’s not so subtle
to play like
these guys

(Guitarists List in 4/4)
Jack White, Dave Davies, Joe Walsh,
Chuck Berry, Joe Perry, Les Paul,
Bob Fripp, Mike Campbell, Nels Cline,
Steve Cropper, Frank Zappa, Steve Vai

The chorus is looser with the hexameter pattern
|- - | - uu | uu - | uu - | - uu | - - |
| - uu | uu - | - uu | - - | - - | uu - |

Chorus in 4/4
I have no say in what you do
I have my doubts about what’s true
Sincerity is partly fiction
When you throw it in the mix

Verse Three in 11/8
Where is this going?
Can we coexist?
Your playlist
De jure

(Bands on Playlist List in 4/4)
Pinback, Black Sabbath, White Stripes,
White Denim, Art Tatum, Bright Eyes
Outkast, Ben Kweller, Nick Drake,
Dutch Uncle, Dutch Widows, James Gang,
Liz Phair, Jawbreaker, Wilco,
King Crimson, St. Vincent, Devo,
Cheap Trick, Flake Music, U2,
Thin Lizzy, Grandaddy, Refused

Chorus in 4/4
I have no say in what you do
I have my doubts about what’s true
Sincerity is partly fiction
When you throw it in the mix

Bridge-Instrumental in 15/8

Chorus in 4/4
I have no say in what you do
I have my doubts about what’s true
Sincerity is partly fiction
When you throw it in the mix

Outo in 11/8

Now with all of the feet markers:
Spoiler| _ _ | _ uu| _ _ | _ uu |_uu| _ _ |

Verse One in 11/8
| Are we | in trouble? |
| Can we | watch movies? |
| perusing |
| Your list: |

| _ _ | _ uu| _ _ | _ uu |_uu| _ _ |
(Movies List in 4/4)
| Nashville | Goodfellas | Duck Soup | Deer Hunter | Blade Runner | High Noon |
| Snow White | Titanic | Ben-Hur | Affliction | Pulp Fiction | Network |

| _ _ | _ uu| _ _ | _ uu |_uu| _ _ |
Verse Two in 11/8
| she knows | my struggle |
| it’s not | so subtle |
| to play like|
| these guys |

(Guitarists List in 4/4)
| Jack White | Dave Davies | Joe Walsh | Chuck Berry | Joe Perry | Les Paul |
| Bob Fripp | Mike Campbell |Nels Cline | Steve Cropper | Frank Zappa | Steve Vai |

The chorus is looser with the hexameter pattern
|- - | - uu | uu - | uu - | - uu | - - |
| - uu | uu - | - uu | - - | - - | uu - |
Chorus in 4/4
| I have | no say in | what you do|
| I have my | doubts about | what’s true |
|sincer-i-| ty is part- | -ly fiction |
| When you | throw it | in the mix |

| _ _ | _ uu| _ _ | _ uu |_uu| _ _ |
Verse Three in 11/8
| Where is | this going? |
| Can we | coexist? |
| Your playlist |
| De jure |

(Bands on Playlist List in 4/4)
| Pinback | Black Sabbath | White Stripes | White Denim | Art Tatum | Bright Eyes |
| Outkast | Ben Kweller | Nick Drake | Dutch Uncle | Dutch Widows | James Gang |
| Liz Phair | Jawbreaker | Wilco | King Crimson | St. Vincent | Devo |
| Cheap Trick | Flake Music | U2 | Thin Lizzy | Grandaddy | Refused |

Chorus
|- - | - uu | uu - | uu - | - uu | - - |
| - uu | uu - | - uu | - - | - - | uu - |
Chorus in 4/4
| I have | no say in | what you do|
| I have my | doubts about | what’s true |
|sincer-i-| ty is part- | -ly fiction |
| When you | throw it | in the mix |

Reviews

3 posted notes

vowlvom

Forum post

I saw all the time signatures and other technical weirdness listed in the lyrics thread and expected not to like this at all, but in fact I like it a fair amount, and like some of the other tricky songs in the middle of my ranking there are parts of it I like a lot and others I'm not keen on and it's very difficult figuring out which one is the most satisfying full package. Mostly, I like the chorus. I dislike the bit where you mention U2. You may suffer in my extremely tight rankings for invoking Bono.

glennny

Forum post

I had so much fun with this. I got very obsessed with hexameter. I wrote pages and pages of lyrics keeping strictly to the form, searching for the words that fit the story that also adhered to the hexameter pattern. I made big lists and pools of Guitarists and Movies and Bands that were spondees or Dactyls. Then I arranged them to play with alliterations and rhymes. Sometimes I write a riff, and then I count it. Oh, this is in 11/8. So I went with it for the verses. I changed it up for the lists and choruses to 4/4. Then I enjoyed a nice 15/8 for the musical interlude. I hope you all enjoyed it.

SquirrelProof

Forum post

The vox floats nicely over the orchestration here, which helps with the time signature. I really like the arrangement of the chime/jangly guitars coming in and out at different points. After a bit, the list line-ending spondees get a little fatiguing - starts to cut into the re-listenability of the song.

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