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The Alleviators

Entry from Novel in Nur Ein XVII.

Create samples from a non-musical recording and make them integral to the song

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NOVEL
by
The Alleviators
SpoilerSample info:
The organ/bells/synth playing through most of the song is a multisample synth made with Iris 2 (using the spectral noise shaping procedure here: https://www.izotope.com/en/learn/sound- ... ris-2.html) and fed midi data. The samples were:
Two separate samples of a beer bottle being struck by a fork (one with an empty bottle, one with some water)
One sample of air being blown in the beer bottle
public domain sample of a car horn

The bass is also a multisample spectral noise synth. that one:
Two different microwave beeping sounds
Beka's Keurig brewing a cup o' joe

Other than that there are some more traditional/recognizable samples:
Snare: keys being slapped on a countertop
Kick: stomping through my hallway
Infernal buzzing sound: public domain recording of bees, tuned and run through various effects
Kid voices: Beka's daughter Robin, vocoded, reversed and otherwise altered
Chill ambience: cicadas and crickets courtesy of Houston TX

<Verse 1:>
Been waiting all day
Laying dreams on a page
That no one else will read
And I say
Why do I do this, why can’t I face
There’s not enough time to leave so much to waste
And not much to show, no

<Chorus 1:>
But I could try
To make something that’s never been
If I get it right
Maybe I’ll be worth something

<Verse 2:>
Been blurring my eyes
Trying to synthesize
From echoes, symphonies

But I hear
That buzz in my head
To run it again
Because even if no one is listening

<Chorus 2:>
I could I try
To make something that’s never been
No reason why
‘Til there’s nothing left to give
And if I die
At least there’ll be traces of me
Left behind
To fill the pages between

<Bridge:>
And isn't that novel, isn't that funny?
The twist in the ending, you never saw coming
You try and you try, and the irony’s rife
But maybe,
That novelty saves your life

<Chorus 3:>
So I will try
To make something that’s never been
Oceans, mountains
Worlds that only I could bring to life
You will find traces of me
In every line
And in the pages between

Reviews

5 posted notes

vowlvom

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firstly and most importantly, this is gorgeous and definitely my favourite of the round. There is one thing that bugs me though, and that's the keys-on-desk sample - there's just too much of it, and it starts to grate and detract from all the other things I love about this song. Would strongly suggest either using it more sparingly or adding some variations on the sample / messing with the pitch / automating a filter just so it isn't the same clacky sound over and over again through so much of the song. Everything else is A+++ though - such a pretty arrangement, excellent vocals, and the big ending is lovely, great idea.

mo

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Full of mood, great pace, plenty of space in the mix. All of Beka's vocal performances have been really good, and this one is no exception. When it goes big, it goes real big, great decision. I wonder if it would've been nice to have it get big earlier so that it could go down and then get even bigger a second time at the end?

furrypedro

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You guys set the bar real high with this song. The arrangement is wildly different from all of your entries so far, which is exactly what I was hoping people would do, and the quality of your writing has been maintained at the same time. After listening to the Stacking Theory track a few times I was tempted to push him above you, but the quiet confidence in these lyrics and melody are what make this a great song that is able to shine atop the musical bed of wonky noises.

Evermind

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I like how closely you've approximated a sort of bell or metallophone from the sound of a bottle being struck with a fork. I'm not wild about the sound of the bass synth, it sounds very rumbly/boomy and occupies a lot of the track with mud. Can't help but feel this song is about struggling to make the song itself. The bees-based synth has a very cool sound to it. I like the payoff of traditional instruments coming in to join the samples (the twist ending), but it takes so long to get there and the rhythm is so anemic until then that the first two minutes of the song feels like an overly long intro.

sailingmagpie

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I absolutely love the understated, Phoebe Bridgers vibe to this. It's a nice contrast to your earlier entries. That range should serve you well this week! The samples work really well and I love all the little variations in the backing. It really rewards multiple listens. As usual, a beautiful vocal performance and I like the idea of the real instruments kicking in at the end but think there's room for them to stack up a bit more to really hit hard.

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