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A Sense of the Absurd
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73 Keep It Beautiful

Entry from A Sense of the Absurd in Nur Ein XII.

Write your lyric around a mondegreen

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A Sense of the Absurd
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73 Keep It Beautiful

telling a story about a mondegreen causing chaos/take a famous lyric mondegreen and build your song about it
from the "'scuse me while I kiss the sky" Hendrix lyric.

smiling at your message on my voicemail
then you said you're going to kiss this guy
now I can't even reach you on the phone
my mind is spinning all the reasons why

it seemed to me that things were kind of perfect
but then you said you're going to kiss this guy
so now I've packed up all your things in boxes
you'll find them in the hall when you come by

maybe it's just your sense of the absurd
but that's what I heard
and it might kill me

so now I've packed up all your things in boxes
you'll find them in the hall when you come by

maybe it's just your sense of the absurd
but that's what I heard
and it might kill me

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Lunkhead

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I really like this style from you. Awesome lush thick harmony vocals, those are so great, particularly the close and dissonant moments. Combined with the your voice, it's very haunting. I'm curious what that instrument is playing the slide part, it's got such a sharp percussive attack.

Manhattan Glutton

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Sugar Ray wants his intro back. Nice work but very repetitious without much dynamics.

Spintown

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The story is from the POV of someone who is stressing out about his girl possibly kissing another guy...but the music is so slow & chill. To me this just doesn’t sit right. The song idea wasn’t bad, but there’s no real conclusion or payoff. Throw in the fact slow songs usually aren’t my thing and you’re looking at a lower ranking from me this round.

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