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Milo Dunderville

Entry from We Need To Talk in Nur Ein V.

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WE NEED TO TALK
Milo Dunderville

When we met, I fell so hard for you
Even now, I recall the thrill
Nobody warned me a girl could make my heart explode
Every morning was bright and shiny
Every night had that je ne sais quoi
Day by day, I felt I’d cracked the gender code

Tuesday morning, I started feeling weird
Over coffee and Raisin Bran
The paper sat unread as I stared off into space
All at once I was out of order
Lacking balance - just kind of off
Kind of queasy behind my new-found poker face

Right now, I’m not so sure of us
I can’t say why
Going with my gut though, I think I’ve lost the
High
Tightropes all around me
Now’s the time to walk
One thing I know: to get on with the show
We need to talk…

Baby, I don’t know just what to say
All my feelings are jumbled
But I’ll confirm at the end of the day
Yes, the mortar has crumbled

Right now, I’m not so sure of us
I can’t say why
Going with my gut though, I think I’ve lost the
High
Tightropes all around me
Now’s the time to walk
One thing I know: to get on with the show
We need to talk…

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glennny

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Needs a solo desperately! What a great groove, why not let loose? Solo = 0
I think your acrostic is great! Respects the space and keeps the song structure! Challenge = 9
Cymbals, kick, snare, and hi-hat all sound really good. I dig the fills this time too. Drums = 8
Excellent bass line! Rhythm is rather the same through out, but solid and groovy! Bass = 8
Vocals are your strong suit. I'm rather jealous. Your voice is just awesome! Vocals =10
Organ sounds great! i like the lead guitar licks better than the distorted rhythm tone. Guitars/organ = 9
Certainly fine lyrics, but they seem forced by the the acrostic. Good but not great. Lyrics =6
A solid structure. Verse,Verse, Chorus, bridge, Chorus. Structure =6
Love the mix! Can't really complain about a thing. Mix = 10
Sorry about the Morse Code crack, it's a really catchy hook! Je ne sais quoi = 7

Milo scores 73

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