I like the moody vibe you're putting down, but I'm afraid this might be the round where your difficulty singing finally catches up to you. I love that beat boxing break in between the verses. The way it continues through the st of the song is really cool and helps keep it interesting! I might suggest deploying some quick fills to maintain interest in the gaps between the lines of your lyrics - there's a lot of space there to play with. This "melody" haunted me as I listened more throughout these two days. The song kept rising up the ranks with each successive listen. Who knows; maybe you'd have won if I'd had two weeks to judge.