Hahaha. Excellent. The beginning is a bit of a weak run-on sentence and could have been tighter, but the interspersing of it is perfect. The track could have used some more mastering polish - songs like this are typically very loud and you can feel the bass kick in your teeth.

This is exactly what I was hoping to see people do. You crafted a sentence that could be broken down to use bits & pieces of. The dance track is a good choice with the lyrical limitations. I probably would have liked a shorter sentence that wasn’t such a run on, but it worked. Next step would be to have various versions of the lines. The rather bland reading of the sentence could later become singing, screaming, whispering or performed any number of ways...but well done.