A solid effort but not a whole lot is standing out while listening. The arrangement is good but fairly static/unchanging. I like the guitar on the right side but it seems just a hair unbalanced (that’s not to say it’s bad.) The 8th note groove in the drums seems incessant which helps drive the song but starts to feel a bit repetitive after a while. I like the guitars (tone/playing) a lot.
Lyric: The lyric works well enough for me. The reveal is maybe not the most elegantly done but, again, I think it works.

Sounds like there are some tuning issues with or between the lead and rhythm guitars in the intro. Then with the vocal and the rhythm guitar on the right? Maybe it's just that guitar in general. The vocals sound a bit strained at times. The phrasing for me feels a little off kilter at times too. Nice guitar solo. I think the verses needed to maybe have more of a hook to them, they feel long in between the choruses, and then the chorus hook is for me just ok.