NUR EIN
almost 10 years agopassed
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Solo Frijoles

Entry from Million Watts in Nur Ein XI.

Song must feature an obvious flaw. Flaw cannot be lyrical.

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She was a runner
Didn’t see the car coming
I got her legs before the ambulance arrived
He was pilot
In the mood for top gunning
We got a room and I
got out with his eyes
Cut the ass
Off a yoga tutor
In my lab with some
Copper suture and

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I thought my beard
was a little uneven
So I faced off with a hipster named Steven
Back from the morgue
With a ziploc of armpits
My chest is as thick
As a bear rug carpet now
Sliced a stripper's
scepter of passion
In a tanker of mild acid and

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There are faces I've re-membered
In my life
I always change
On a soft summer night
Rows of candyshell houses
And I walk the street
With the day’s remains...

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noma

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Composition: 9/10
Lyrics: 8/10
Performance: 8/10
Production: 8/10

Creativity bonus: 3
Challenge bonus: 4

Micah's Mountain Goats comparison was spot on. This is my favorite chorus of the round. I assumed your flaw was in the loose instrumentation; am I correct? Especially the drums, they really caught my attention.

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