superb lead guitar work on this, I love the ascending / descending riffs and the guitarmonies. I could definitely go for something a little hookier in the vocals but they work in terms of vibe and attitude. Lyrics are really interesting when read but I don't really pick up on them when listening and I think that's because the instrumental is so much more interesting and grabs all of my attention.

I really like the guitar work in this track and there are some really cool drums in the back. Overall I have really enjoyed your work this year, you have really stepped it up and it's nice to hear you are still going strong.

I thought you hit the challenge, did a good job with it.
I like the music. The intro sets up the song nicely. Good rhythm. Outside of the vocal, I felt the mix was very good. The vocal just didn't sit perfectly for me. You may have been dinged a bit because I do a decent part of my listening on inferior speakers and this song/vocal suffered more than most because of it. Just seems like it's masked a bit in places. That being said, I'm listening back as I type this up and I do like the song. The transition at :55ish was good. I love the feel from 1:30 especially with that rhythm. I just felt it didn't stand up compared to some of the other entries. There's literally not a bad song in the group.

I had you in second place on my first listen through. I really like your guitar playing and I found your percussion groove super-compelling! But your vocal is still a little rough; it sounds to me like you might be pushing your voice to the edge of its range and struggling to hit your notes. What I really like about this song is that it has a lot of dynamic range and sections that are especially distinct from one another. One problem I noticed throughout the week was that, even after listening many times, I couldn't remember the melody when I wasn't listening to it, which ultimately dragged you to the middle of the pack.