I can tell you whole-assed this one, good to hear both halves fully engaged! That riff is massive, and surprisingly RATM-esque. Lyrics are great fun with plenty of killer lines, and I love how they build the story up to make the part that satisfies the challenge feel like the key part of the song. The spacy end section works really well too. I found myself wishing there was more of a melodic section to offset the rap-rock, but very much enjoyed this on the whole.

super badass, very Rage Against the Machine vibes

This is fun! I didn’t entirely follow the story as I was listening, but I’m on board with alien adventures, and you sold it with the energy of the music and your delivery, the ridiculous neutron star break, and I really liked some of those rhythms (2nd half of the “Jupiter” verse). I would have liked more of a change-up as far as the constant RATM guitars, or maybe this song could have been a bit shorter, but the lyrics were interesting enough to keep me listening. This was not one of my very favorites of the round, but I enjoyed it.

I loved this take on the challenge that it's both an instruction book and a retelling of an epic sci-fi adventure that used the book. I loved that grunge guitar, although the cadence of the verses just started to get a little boring, so it was a good choice to end those when you did. That robotic voice at the very end is very clipped, and it was a little hard to understand what it was saying; if you use that again, finding a way to have the voice end its words, that would help.

your vocals strongly remind me of dizzee rascal on you got the dirtee love from the Brit awards in 2010. This is another cool idea that was well executed and i dont have much to say. The end was cool in a 2001 a space odyssey kind of way. Well done.