HeuristicsInc
Forum posti like how you worked brand names into the lyrics. And the whoas in the chorus are pretty great. I like the spoken asides but you might want to work on making them more in the same sonic space as the other vocals.
Line cliche part is done over a C and G chord respectively in the verse on a high electric guitar on top of the rhythm guitar;
one additional portion of line cliche in the bridge for good measure where the bass is holding a long note (I think it's an A but darned if I remember now, might be G#) underneath a descending guitar line.
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MechaKarp
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Crush Season
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V1
I saw you looking over, across the frito lays
Past the cooler ranch, beside the lottery display
Behind the hottest pockets, through the looking glass
It's a chemical reaction, my heart is beating fast
PCH
And oh it's such a rush
when I chug that Orange Crush
CH
My teeth have shrunk to tiny orange pebbles (wa oh, wa oh oh oh)
My dentist is in therapy, cuz I'm such a soda rebel
My smile, an amber glow, and by now you know
I don't need a reason
Cuz it's crush season
V2
We've had our share of strife, I dated a vegan acrobat
She said that orange #5 was made from donkey fat (are you SURE that's an animal product??)
Next a cardiologist declared my heart would soon explode
Well the joke's gonna be on her, I've got an extra one of those (DUDE, that's KIDNEYS)
PCH
And oh it's such a rush
when I chug that Orange Crush
CH
My teeth have shrunk to tiny orange pebbles (wa oh, wa oh oh oh)
My dentist is in therapy, cuz I'm such a soda rebel
My smile, an amber glow, and by now you know [[chops]]
I don't need a reason
Cuz it's crush season
BR descending semitones
Tangerine dreams, in the future we're together
Growing old, sipping life through my neon Orange dentures
[Solo?]
CH (Double chorus outtro?)
My teeth have shrunk to tiny orange pebbles (wa oh, wa oh)
My dentist is in therapy, cuz I'm such a soda rebel
My smile, an amber glow, and I'm sure you know
I don't need a reason
I don't need a reason
My teeth shrunk to tiny orange pebbles (wa oh, wa oh).
My dentist is in therapy, cuz I'm such a soda rebel
My smile, an amber glow, and I'm sure you know
I don't need a reason
I don't need a reason
I don't need a reason
Cuz it's crush season
i like how you worked brand names into the lyrics. And the whoas in the chorus are pretty great. I like the spoken asides but you might want to work on making them more in the same sonic space as the other vocals.