I'm on the third listen. I don't know, I feel like this might grow on me if I keep trying. I like most of your other stuff. But the parts of this song don't sound to me like they fit together. It's kind of weirdly cobbled. My wife, who hates about 90% of what she hears on Songfight, found this tolerable. I hope you don't get kicked out because of this song, but it's definitely not your strongest work.