The two main things that bug the crap out of me about this entry are the lead guitar at the intro, it sounds like ass and it's badly played, then there's the line "whenever you go down and hit the ground I've always been around to see what kind of pain you've found". The desperate cramming of as many rhymes into the line might be acceptable in hip hop but in this track it is absolutely cringeworthy. The vocal acrobatic moments when you go for the Maroon 5-rockin-out vibe don't quite work out for you, and you should consider yourself lucky that I'm trying to be more objective than normal this round cos I hate Maroon 5. The backing track here and most of your singing is solid in terms of production. Of all things it's your lead guitar playing that lets it down, but ultimately after repeated listens I can't find anything compelling in the melody or lyrics.