Your spoken word sections work really well; the sung sections unfortunately have some familiar problems, it feels like your lyrics are always lagging behind the beat a little. This is a really interesting track though, your lyrics are evocative and enjoyably personal and I like the switch from the atmospheric verse to the chorus which has more of a folky vibe. I found myself imagining a Bond film that had your diary-song as a theme and that was amusing to me, so thank you for that, also.