jast
Forum postDid you put some weird effect on the backup vocals? Sounds like you recorded this through drain pipes. Very decent arrangement, though. The hospital sounds (which are far from a true cacophony, by the way, but at least they're sort of significant) don't sit well in the mix. Song is a bit drawn out. Huh, sudden ending. Good lead vocals, though you have a tendency to getting nasal especially on the lower notes. I can relate to the story (except for the dying part). The limiting factor here is definitely the mix, and of course points off for not-really-cacophonic.