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Forum postVocals are a little pitchy and feel a little buried in the mix. I like the sound of the brass and Mellotron flutes in here. Concept is two people with opposed seasonal depression, a cool concept. Song feels a little repetitive.
Entry from Summer Robot in Nur Ein XVII.
Sonic palette comprised of instruments/sounds/timbres not used in previous rounds
Summer Robot by Vom Vorton
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I didn’t want to write about an actual robot, because I’ve kinda done that subject to death, so I came up with this idea about a pair of lovers who suffer from equal but opposite forms of seasonal affective disorders. We’ve all been there, right?
For my sonic palette, I went with:
piano
electronic drums
brass
mellotron flute
I also wrote in a time signature I’ve never used before (12/8), used a different rhyme pattern and included a spoken / speak-sung section so at least part of the vocal track would also have a different element to it.
every spring I come alive
shake the dust and the sadness from my eyes
and every year I feel surprised
that your sun doesn’t seem to shine
I’m throwing open the windows
I’m singing just to help the grass grow
our energies don’t really seem to match, though
you are in decline
when the days are long
it feels like I get taller
and when the nights close in
I’m hardly there at all
the evidence was plain to see
but I ignored all the clues
you were my summer robot
but I had the winter blues
autumn smoke is in the air
my heart prickles with despair
I reach for you, but you don’t care
you’re blind to my situation
now the blood is freezing in my veins
as you come back to life again
you’re out singing in the rain
I’m going into hibernation
when the sun is high
you’re hiding in the shadows
when the clouds come in
you’re dancing in the park
the evidence was plain to see
but I ignored all the clues
you were my summer robot
I had the winter blues
our relationship really made no sense
we knew we didn’t fit together, but in our defence
the passion could be something quite intense
when the conditions were just right
a cool but sunny morning
a hot and rainy evening storm
you left me with no warning
I miss you every night
Vocals are a little pitchy and feel a little buried in the mix. I like the sound of the brass and Mellotron flutes in here. Concept is two people with opposed seasonal depression, a cool concept. Song feels a little repetitive.
When I first heard this I thought it sounded like an S Club 7 song. But maybe a kinder comparison would be The Divine Comedy at their most jaunty (which, let's be honest, is pretty fucking jaunty). You weren't to know this but I do have a bias against this kind of swing beat on the hi-hat, and I think this the main source of any negative sentiment I have about this song, as everything else pretty nice. Good to hear your busting out your piano chops, and all the brass and flutes, etc. lend a Beatles-esque vibe. I was wondering if you were singing about an actual robot or not, now I realise not. I'm not sure if the robot epithet feels appropriate in this context. In any case, this is bursting with energy so there is an infectious sense of fun about it.
I saw your admission of accidental Gruff Rhys plagiarism but what this really reminded me of was the theme to 80s afternoon quiz show Going for Gold, a reference that very few people reading this will get, I imagine (Fun fact, that theme was written by future Hollywood ubercomposer Hans Zimmer!). It's really paid dividends that you've dived all in and grabbed the challenge by the horns. Speaking of horns, the 80s Casio brass is great on this though I do kinda agree with Furrypedro on the hihats. Plus points for going all Jarvis Cocker, spoken word halfway through.