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Forum postlike the BSS track, this is fine, but it lacked the interesting idea / hook / whatever to make it memorable for me, it feels a little uninspired - the double-speed switch-up is fairly effective but isn't enough to grab me.
Partly Fiction
by Max Bombast
"Everything happens for a reason"
"Everyone's unique in their own way"
"Everybody's working for the weekend"
"Every dog has got to get his day"
These are the little lies we say
"What doesn't kill you makes you stronger"
"If you ignore them they will go away"
"Every day drink eight glasses of water"
"You too can afford to buy this brand new car today!"
These are the little lies we say
It's only partly fiction
But the part that is fiction
Is the only part that's any good
You could be forgiven for
Believing what was written
But everybody understood that
These are the little lies
We whisper to ourselves at night
To calm us down
Come on now, let's go another round!
"Money doesn't really make you happy"
"Hard work's the key to getting rich"
"Poverty is nothing but a state of mind"
"When you're gone I promise you will be missed"
These are the little lies we say
It's only partly fiction
But the part that is fiction
Is the only part that's any good
You could be forgiven for
Believing what was written
But everybody understood that
These are the little lies
We whisper to ourselves at night
To calm us down
Come on now, let's go another round!
Alright, that's enough white lies for now
like the BSS track, this is fine, but it lacked the interesting idea / hook / whatever to make it memorable for me, it feels a little uninspired - the double-speed switch-up is fairly effective but isn't enough to grab me.
This is amazing. Your vocals are amazing! Everything sounds awesome. I have 2 issues with this song. 1st- Lyrics- I get that you know these are cliché’s. That’s the point, but it still makes me cringe to have to hear them strung together. I feel like Sammy Hagar would deliver these seriously. 2nd issue: That kick. Way too much kick. I despise double kick drums, this is close to it. It’s impressive when one can play it like that, but it never sounds good to me. Nit Pick. This is awesome.
This is super-catchy, and the vocals are great. While I'm not sure whether I dislike the double-time section, it doesn't hang together organically for me, and I wonder about roads unfollowed that might shake the song up in a more interesting way.