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Floating in the Water
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Boffo Yux Dudes

Entry from Floating in the Water in Nur Ein XVII.

Incorporate at least two different narratives from at least 500 years apart

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Floating in the Water
by Boffo Yux Dudes

(Current man)

In hundreds of years, Who will be here?
See through the strife - survive all the fears?
I’ll send out a bottle with a message inside
and then let the tide - show the future we tried

What should I say? Hello - hey it's me?
A long dead member on your family tree?
Things here are crazy - hope you read this
and you've somehow come crawling back from the abyss

Chorus

Floating in the water, words from the past
500 years gone since this line was cast
Comes here and now - a Time and a Space
Will we keep running the Human Race?

(Future man)

The Sun is so warm - hot wind on my face
I’m the last man standing of the human race
The fish are all dead, the birds stopped their songs
There’s no point in singing if the world is all gone

But what is that bobbing - alone in the sea?
A shiny floating treasure - headed straight to me?
Shocked out of my stupor I do something rash
Wade into the surf while avoiding the trash

I grab at the bauble as it floats in the flow
A bottle whose message dissolved long ago
It’s not glass or metal, has lived or died
It’s made out of plastic- that’s all that survived....

Chorus

Floating in the water, words from the past
500 years gone since this line was cast
Comes here and now - a Time and a Space
Will we keep running the Human Race?

(Cosmic Either Beach Boys Time Travel Break)

Floating in the water, words from the past
500 years gone since this line was cast
Comes here and now - a Time and a Space
Will we keep running the Human Race?

Floating in the water, words from the past
500 years gone since this line was cast
Comes here and now - a Time and a Space
Will we keep running the Human Race?

Reviews

3 posted notes

Future Boy

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it's kind of plodding and i think needs more instrumental breaks. the words just keep going and going and going. this might work OK if it was a bit faster and had more driving drums. the bom-bom-bom section is cool and a nice change. don't like the shaker sound / how it is mixed, sounds out of place. vocal harmonies on the chorus at the end help a lot.

glennny

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I dig the Beach Boys time travel bridge especially. Cool concept. In general, I find the bpm a bit slow for my tastes. Ends with a wimper, not so much a bang. The narratives are solid. Good stuff!

furrypedro

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This is fairly well executed, but unfortunately a well-executed tuneless dirge is still a tuneless dirge. I'm not really a fan of the story lyrics because there's far too many lines that sound overly literal, and the lack of abstraction or metaphor makes the song dry and colourless.

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