glennny
Forum postscores 73
Someone's cold ... but she's
Much too old
Undersold ... but now she's
Rust and bone
Find
Someone
We need to talk
this valentines day
I fell in love
but it was too easy
hearts of gold
upward rose
no one's bold
that lives alone
find
someone
We need to talk
this valentines day
I fell in love
but it was too easy
(solo)
find
someone
(quiet)
We need to talk
this valentines day
I fell in love
but it was too easy
(big/end)
Hearts of gold
what do you know
the rich are undersold
now you're rust and bone
Hearts of gold
what do you know
the rich are undersold
now you're rust and bone
The acrostic is HUNT and SMURFS. The challenge totally raped me, so I'm just glad to have gotten a song in.
scores 73
he electric Uke? Is solid as hell! Strumming tight! Rhythm Guitar/Uke = 8
Have to admit I'm totally into the serious Handy now! Is this serious? Goes on the TW3RP B-Side right? Vocals = 10
Excellent lyrics! You are often my favorite Song Fight lyricist, well told story with clever lines. Appropriate placed Fuck too! Lyrics = 10
Unless there's a solo, there is no 10. Structure = 9
Ken and Sam spoil me. This is a good mix, but could be better. I feel like I don't have the best seats for your set. Mix = 6
Enjoying this with every listen. Maybe too short. Je ne sais quoi = 10
hose drums are tight! i thought it was going to be Hip-Hop before everything else entered. Drums = 10
Awesome bass line! It sounds great and the movement is hypnotic. Bass = 10
Really wonderfully sounding song. What are all the instruments? Guitar/Sitar = 10
Really love the harmonies. Your voice sounds great! Vocals = 10
Understand I hate songs about songs. Lyrics = 1
Love the instrumental bits especially. It's like a dance song. Not a real ending. Structure = 5
Excellent mix! everything sounds near perfect! Mix = 10
Suppose I've come to expect more from you at this point. Sounds great, but just OK for you. Je ne sais quoi = 7
he bass is not there. Theoretically a piano could fill that role. I barely hear it. Bass = 2
Have to give you props for the piano, you anti guitar strange dude. Piano = 6
Everyone knows you’re singing your ass off, but wow it’s pitchy. Vocals = 3
Basically good lyrics, no obvious cliche's, fits against the acrostic. Lyrics = 7
Again I think it would have been stronger to end the 1st time. Cut off all the La's. Structure = 5
Something about the mix is way off. I think lack of bass. vocals too loud. Mix =2
Still a good song, with good effort if not delivery. Je ne sais quoi = 4
he bass line is laid back and in the pocket with the drums. bass =10
Really loving this song! I love my band! hope it translates for everyone else. Je ne sais quoi = 10
he bass is tasty and slutty. I especially like it in the breakdown. Bass = 8
You got a weird wetness on the guitar, I'm not liking alone, but like in the context of the band. Rhythm guitar = 7
Man you're a rock star! What you lack in melody you make up for in conviction. Vocals = 8
Of all the lyrics in this fight, these gentle, subtle turns of phrase, make me almost cry. Lyrics = 3
Uncompromising rock! You'd never convince me you lived anywhere other than Los Angeles. Structure = 10
he mix is fantastic, I guess I just want more kick. Ken had spoiled me. Mix = 9
Hot damn this is a solid rocker! Wish you spent more time on the lyrics. Je ne sais quoi= 7
Sweet solo! Totally fits, and brings to life this plodding rocker. Blazing licks! Solo = 10
Low marks on the challenge. Seems it got the best of you. Too bad, we had several to spare. Challenge = 1
Obviously the drums are awesome! Now I want a drum solo! Drums =10
With this tempo what is a bassist to do? Bass is solid and metal! Bass = 8
Really digging the band vibe you have going on. I hope it sticks! Rhythm guitars = 8
Octave hooks were great. I miss them. You're singing your ass off! I like but just don't love your voice. Vocals =7
C'mon is this about anything? I could love this song for years without reading the lyrics. Lyrics = 2
Keeping those vocal hooks for so late in the song, make them all the more delicious. Structure = 9
Everything sounds live and in one room. There's either excessive cymbals or distortion hiss white noise, small deal. Mix = 8
Reist this is great! Je ne sais quoi = 10