Last week I said I wish I had written your song, but I don't think I could really write anything that good. This one actually sounds like something I might have written. Especially as it is about one of my favourite books. I like the drums (or whatever it is) and the way the song is written - but, because I am really searching for faults here - I am going to mark you down on your accent. And your descended testicles. Your voice just doesn't say "Lord of the Flies" to me. I want a pre-pubescent English boy (OK - I know the Courts and their Restraining Orders won't let me have one). Maybe a bit of Kyrie Eleison would have convinced me more. I have to mark these some way - but the bottom line is this was still entertaining.

I liked the pacing of this, and kitchen stuff kinda sounded like wind chimes...that was cool. Is this about a movie or something? Sounds familiar, but something I hadn't seen in maybe a loooong time.

On the one hand I like the atonal aspect of the things you’re hitting, but my ambivalence holds hatred for it in the other hand. I also think maybe this is too short. This doesn’t have the full arc of a song. I am impressed and jealous of your concept. Good freaking idea! The melody isn’t much of a melody. Don’t get me wrong it totally works, but I think a melodic hook somewhere good elevate this song. You know like “too much, Magic Bus!”. This is very cool, and very good. I won’t be surprised if this makes it to the finals. Awesome job!

Love the concept and the bold execution as well. I love Lord Of the Flies (book) and totally dig this. You could almost run it parralell to Man-Glut's, using it to speak of today's frothin media fear mongers. Feels longer than it is, not a complaint, because so much happens. I think the length is fine and the 'conch' wonderful. Predicting either this or WSA to go up against Merisan in the final.

This rocks. Unfortunately it's hard to make out a consistent-like melody (and the "bass" doesn't keep the pitch, neither in itself nor relative to the lead vocals), which I think detracts from the song quite a bit. Inventive, though. Very metaphorical song (disclaimer: haven't read the novel). I can stomach that today. Nice job.