I like the concept but not sure about the execution, could've been filled out more.

intriguing intro but the rest of the song doesn't live up to it. Having seen your posts about your time away from music I won't go into too much depth, looking forward to hearing what you come up with once you've gotten back into the groove!

interesting. I want to see the short film this is based on. 🙂 not my fav; I like all the elements, but I keep finding my mind wandering off before the end of the song.