NUR EIN
10 months agowon
5:05
Dark Cove
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Grumpy Mike

Entry from Dark Cove in Nur Ein XX.

Make use of handclaps and snaps

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keep your head down, and take the low road
this is where it gets you. a darkened abode.
No one to see. No to love.
Just hell below. No heaven above.

keep to yourself, your thoughts and prayers
then suffocate them in this cold, stale air
there is a light that wants to shine through
nothing's gonna change till that boulder starts to move

peel back the stone
you don't have to be alone
peel back the stone, now
this was never your home

Now you've explored every inch of your cell
Counted the cracks, and you know them all too well
You hear the echo, it's the only voice you trust
All while your purpose slowly overgrows with rust

The safer you are
The less that you live
The more that you keep
The less you can give

The longer you wait
The deeper it gets
The colder it feels
The more you forget

Reviews

3 posted notes

Pigfarmer Jr

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I’m loving the arrangement. I love the heft. Heavy without being bludgeoning. With lots of space and dynamic changes to keep its five minutes from being too much (much less painful.) Those loud guitars are so up front, I love them but maybe the mix isn’t the smoothest it could be. Still very good. Going into the 2:46 section seems just a tad off for some reason. But I like both sections. Maybe it’s the drum sounds. Seems very tight and dry and upfront. Regardless, picking nits isn’t really fair to a song that I think is extremely well written and performed. Lyrically, this seems more like a dark cave than a dark cove but I like the lyric quite a bit.

roymond

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SOLID!
The humming and claps opening is instantly engaging. The almost-metal arrangement is tight and clean. Vocal performance spot on. This is the chorus I had in my head much of the last 4 days. Very catchy! Sorta missed the prompt, but exceeded its spirit.
"The more you keep, the less you can give" rings true. Wraps up nicely.

Lunkhead

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For a second this started off like it could have been a Sober song. 😂 I suspect maybe you also misread the title as "Dark Cave"? The chorus is super duper 90s sounding. For me that works. I think some of the transitions between parts, particularly in the first half of the song, feel a little clunky and could be smoother. The bridge breakdown is maybe a bit long. I think there could have been some additional instrumentation there, maybe a pad of some sort, or something with some movement, like a slow arpeggio or something. There sounds like there is some kind of drum mistake right in the beginning of the chorus after the bridge? The ending feels a bit abrupt, a couple more "chugga ... chugga ...." might have been nice.