A lovely wash of a song, gives me a Peter Bjorn and John vibe. Wonderful guitar solos, and it takes a lot for me to like a guitar solo. I like the verse more than the chorus, which I consider a problem in a pop song.

Berkley Social Scene: Love that guitar tone. Awkward non-rhymes. "Tweet on the hour", haha ugh. The harmonies on the last chorus are sweet and the whole ending is a dream.

This is not the anime theme song I wanted. That said, it's pretty good given your restrictions. The beginning vocals and harmonies are very nice. Things get a bit lost after (you lost your balance? haaaaa). I don't know what the words mean, but they aren't annoying and are nestled in a pretty song, so, nice work.

Nice work with the vocalist. Musically it was interesting & well done. Lyrically I’m just thinking we have different tastes. I like telling clear stories, and you seem to be more about feeling & presenting a general picture. It sucks ranking you lower for something that’s not bad at all, but not something I personally enjoy. Dems the breaks I guess.