Like this one better than last round's but it's a trick -it's gonna go hideous metally isn't it? But the melody is better and the slower pace allows me to appreciate the song. Not the meta lyric, though. Ah well, it went punk instead, which is fine.

Oh, boy, more birds. At least it's in your verses, a better implementation than some entries. I some of your melodies a lot. It kicks in and I get a Green Day feel (sorry if that's an insult, not meant to be.) There are a few pops (like at 2:17 and 2:38) that are minor but noticeable (mainly because I really hear it in another entry.) This is competently done but ultimately doesn't really hit me in the right spot.