I think what pushed this up to #2 on my list was that organ. Excellent playing, but not distracting from the rest of the song. I love this power-pop stuff, and you probably know that. The lyrics do a great job of setting the scene, and I like the angle you took, being disillusioned with the abandoned ideals of the counterculture. I liked this, and I don't really have much critical to say here. Great work!