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The Dutch Widows

Entry from Partly Fiction in Nur Ein XVIII.

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Firstly:
Very much here for this lyric! Already my favourite this round without hearing it! 8-)

The Dutch Widows' song is DW's 'advice guy' mode - a song of life advice for my son as he leaves university next week. Good luck mate!

Partly Fiction by The Dutch Widows

Be bold, say ‘yes’ more than you say ‘no’
Embrace everything with your body and soul but not people
Unless you have permission; consent is important.

Just listen, conversation is more than just words
Talking’s pretty good, listening opens more doors.
Laugh a lot, laugh out loud
If you laugh at yourself, you’ll have years of entertainment that needs no-one else.
See the world for yourself it’s a marvellous place
We’re relying on you to fix the human race.

Nearly grown, still partly fiction
All there waiting now for you to be free
Take your time, there’s no-one better to be

Be open to experience but don’t be reckless
That’s not the way to get longevity.
Put photos in a book document your adventures
They carry more weight non-digitally.
Be kind to the animals, the best of us
They’re trusting and they’re helpful and should always be free!

Nearly grown, still partly fiction
All there waiting now for you to be free
Take your time, there’s no-one better to be
Life moves fast, it’s precious, can’t you see?
Remember every moment and you’ll be fine

Should have learned more by the age I am
The time I wasted and I’ve barely begun
I wish I’d taken my own advice
Listened more to my parents as they seemed quite nice
I was young and pretty foolish with a head full of dreams
More testosterone and gas than brains it seems

All there waiting now for you to be free
Take your time there’s no-one better to be
Life moves fast, not partly fiction to me
Remember every moment

Money’s nice, don’t treat it as a goal
The path to contentment isn’t paved in gold.
Trust people to be who they say
They’re just doing things in their own sweet way.

Be bold
Be open and kind
Be patient
Be fair and nice
Be bold

Reviews

3 posted notes

vowlvom

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the way the verse melody follows the guitar so closely kinda stopped me from getting into this one, not necessarily a terrible choice but certainly one I've always found a little offputting. The chorus is pretty good but this still felt like it fell a little short of the high points you've reached so far this Nur Ein, still solidly enjoyable but definitely in my "tricky to rank middle section of songs where I liked stuff about them but not everything".

glennny

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What is that riff? It sounds so familiar. Maybe it’s just a good catchy riff, but I feel like it’s something. Wait! I got it. Cage the Elephant! “Mess Around”, I guess it just reminds me of it. https://youtu.be/ZCkTJSZskhM This is catchy! This is great! I like Brits who sing with British accents. (Thanks for being cool with me including your name in my lyrics, Dutch Widows is a great Dactyl)

SquirrelProof

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Nice song construction, nice riff, nice theme. I'm stuck with not many nits to pick so I just wonder what this might sound like with a more lively vocal take? There's a kind of irony to the vox I wouldn't want you to lose (the song may then be preachy) but as it is it brings a little detachment as well?

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