theSundayColors
Forum postThe chorus is well done, as is the use of the song title. Another example of a song that I think incorporates “Pump The Brakes” smoothly.
Pump the Brakes
Ujn Hunter & Friends
*You think you got time to run around
You think you got time to run your mouth
Well I think your time is running out
And things for you are heading south
I know you think you're perfect
That's not the way this works
I don't have to deal with your shit no more
And now you're the one who's hurt
Whoa baby, pump them brakes!
Whoa baby, pump them brakes!
You know you ain't got no patience
You know that you were damn wrong
Well I know that it didn't have to end this way
But you were already long gone
I know you think you're perfect
That's not the way this works
I don't have to deal with your shit no more
And now you're the one who's hurt
Whoa baby, pump them brakes!
Whoa baby, pump them brakes!*
The chorus is well done, as is the use of the song title. Another example of a song that I think incorporates “Pump The Brakes” smoothly.
solidly enjoyable but the attention to detail I've come to expect from your tracks seems to be lacking, the guitar and drums feel like they drift out of time a little in the second verse / chorus and after the cool drum-free pre-chorus I feel like the chorus needs a bigger lift.
The singing & the music was pretty good. Didn’t really like the hook though, just wasn’t catchy or creative. Lyrically it’s fine aside from the fact you don’t really target anyone specific. That’s kinda my issue with a lot of the songs this round. You’ll probably do better than most since at least yours sounded good.
I wish this got a bit louder and bigger--I know you can do that well, and it felt like you were holding back, or something. I'm apparently in the minority, but the prechorus where this drops back to just vocals and guitar strums didn't really work for me, vox/guitar didn't sound coordinated, but less in a devil-may-care punk rock way and more in an amateurish way. I do really like the vocals and the guitar solo, which is full of attitude. (Can I say that about a guitar solo? I will say it anyway.) So-so on the diss meter. I liked the verses more than the choruses, but the chorus is pretty catchy.