chewmeupspitmeout - Choose Your Own Adventure

NUR EIN

chewmeupspitmeout

Choose Your Own AdventureNur Ein XVIII

almost 3 years agoeliminated

3:25

Download Round Band

chewmeupspitmeout

Entry from Choose Your Own Adventure in Nur Ein XVIII.

Ska or Glitch (not both)

LyricsShow lyrics

Choose Your Own Adventure by chewmeupspitmeout

I could build a cathedral
A pointless Monument to you
I wonder if you feel invisible too?
The ground feels so cold
Beneath my shoulder blades
Mossy rocks river spray

Fly away
Little bird
Fly away
My diurnal love
Gone into twilight
You can choose...

An afterthought, a relic
From a better time
When we could still
Pretend that we were blind
Tiny pinpricks of light
Dapple upon your cheek
Fireflies dancing in the rouge

Tipping over the edge
Of this cliff we've built
Out of silence and shame
But it's too late to play the blame game

Is not dying alone
A good enough reason to stay?
You can choose you own adventure
Fly away

But I always preferred the sad songs
Didn't I
But I always preferred the sad songs
Didn't I
But I always preferred the sad songs
Didn't I

Reviews

1 posted notes

vowlvom

Jul 4, 2023Forum post

cool glitchy arrangement and I like the vocal melody, the chorus melody is nicely "soaring". I do think there's room here to have a beat kick in and anchor the song a little more at some point, but the subtler approach you went for did grow on me across several listens.

chewmeupspitmeout - Choose Your Own Adventure | Nur Ein