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Shock Value
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Entry from Shock Value in Nur Ein XIV.

Make a song with quiet and loud parts -- like every Pixies song you love. This can mean crescendos or decrescendos, sudden loud noises, whatever, just make good use of dynamics.

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Shock Value
by Lichen Throat

Let me tell you some events
I wrote in my new book.
It's set in 1828;
Won't you take a look?

Fog and mud obscure the streets,
Wrapping all in autumn chill.
Eyes are downcast; no one greets
Fellow men on Holborn Hill.
In the rag and bottle shop
Lives the greedy Mr. Krook,
Hoarding things that others drop,
Stacking papers, trash, and books.
He extorts impoverished tenants,
He’s the scourge of Lincoln’s Inn.
He will never be repentant,
Never cease his bitter grin.
Hating life without cessation,
Fed with greed and soaked in gin,
He explodes in conflagration,
Catching fire from within.

I didn’t do it for shock value;
I wrote it to expose the fires
That burn inside the greedy misers,
The evil men, the shameless liars.

From the sky the ash flakes drop;
Greasy odors fill the air,
Worse than burning mutton chops,
More than anyone can bear.
Young man on the windowsill,
Fingers drenched in yellow oil,
He has never felt so ill,
Such compulsion to recoil.
Through the door to Krook's abode,
Burnt remains upon the floor,
Finally reaping what he sowed,
Dead and gone forevermore.
Hating life without cessation,
Fed with greed and soaked in gin,
Now consumed in conflagration,
Catching fire from within.

You may tell me this can't happen,
But I say that you are wrong.
Read all 22 installments;
It's a great book, though it's long.

Reviews

5 posted notes

vowlvom

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I think technically this is the Best Ever Lichen Throat song. Vocals are on time throughout, music is interesting and well produced and I love the bass / muted guitar melody thing you've done in these last two songs. The lyrics and vocal melody don't quite grab me like my favourite LT songs do and the dynamics don't feel particularly different from your usual fare to me, but this is really good work!

lichenthroat

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(me) – I was happy with the main verses and chorus, less so with the intro/interlude/outro. I think it’s one of my better vocal performances. I was unpleasantly surprised to be in last place, but thus is life.

Cybronica

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your singing is getting better with each round! I like that now I can tell it’s your song before I hear you. “Fed with greed and soaked with gin” love that line. The poetry is great.

Spintown

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Ok, I get that singing isn’t your strong suit, but you have to do something to change up the tone of your songs. As they are you start to zone out after 8 lines or so cause they all sound the same. This is 2 in a row that seem more suited to be read aloud in a poetry house, and not performed as a song. I actually like the writing at times, but transforming that into a song hasn’t worked out so well.

Adam!

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Digging the drum beat here, especially the occasional tom hits for emphasis. More oomph in the vocal delivery, please.

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