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Merisan
Patient Number 7Nur Ein VI
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Patient Number 7
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Entry from Patient Number 7 in Nur Ein VI.

Significant use of cacophony.

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Patient Number Seven
By Merisan

Patient number seven isn't feeling very well
He won't admit that he's ill, but I can tell
Even if there was a bandage that would fit
He'd never get used to it
He has a hole in his soul that's deeper than a well

But I've got the prescription for a lonely pout
Sometimes what you've been holding in
You've got to let it out

Mr. Sockmonkey has a temperature of sixty-nine
It might seem low to you, but for him, it's fine
And Miss Elephant has a nasty cold
The poor rubber ducky's growing mold
Let's try our hardest to keep him warm and dry

But I've got the prescription for a lonely pout
Sometimes what you've been holding in
You've got to let it out

But I've got the prescription for a lonely pout
Sometimes what you've been holding in
You've got to let it out

Reviews

3 posted notes

jast

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Great development/arrangement. I like this lyrical approach, even though I don't quite know what you're talking about. In this case I don't mind though. I can't find any cacophony in this song at all, though. Many, many points off.

Spintown

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Nice vocals...again. Music was ok, but this is the first time I didn't really care for the story you told.

Caravan Ray

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This is a dull song that fails the challenge. Erin's voice is still good - but it only gets you so far.

John Klobodanz: Great use of challenge. Not what I expected - but it works for me. I liked this as a song - I found the lyrics a bit weak. But it was still a good listen.

Merisan - Patient Number 7 | Nur Ein