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Homestretch
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Entry from Homestretch in Nur Ein XV.

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Homestretch (shadow entry)
by Lichen Throat

This is one of those songs where the lyrics never directly mention the subject, which is left as an exercise for the listener. I'll keep the explanation behind a spoiler tag, in case anyone is interested in figuring it out. Those of you from Wisconsin may be somewhat advantaged.
Liner Notes
This song is about Frank Lloyd Wright and his continually expanding house, Taliesin, in Spring Green, Wisconsin, which was the site of numerous scandals and tragedies, including two fires and a mass murder.

Assuming I understood the polyrhythm/polymeter explanation properly, the verses are in polymeter and the chorus is in polymeter.

Driven out of Chicago
For stealing a client’s wife.
Now I’ve got to let go
My chef with his butcher knife.
I went out of town, and they were
Dead when I came back.
Seven people murdered
By the hatchet man’s attack.
My house keeps burning down;
Let’s build another wing.
Encircle this hill like a crown,
And treat me like a king.

My new wife loves Gurdjieff;
I've got students at my home.
They do all the drafting,
So I can freely roam.
Those guys can't find girlfriends, so
My wife cooked up a plan.
They’re giving her ideas a try—
I hope it doesn’t get out of hand.
My house keeps burning down;
Let’s build another wing.
Encircle this hill like a crown,
And treat me like a king.

Add another room, add another hall.
(homestretch, homestretch)
Make it nice and wide, but I don’t want it tall.
(homestretch)

I don’t like to pay taxes,
So I'll say I'm a charity.
I’m still afraid of axes,
And can't practice austerity
No one can beat my mystique,
So I’ll design your city.
My houses have a few leaks,
But man, they sure look pretty.
My house keeps burning down;
Let’s build another wing.
Encircle this hill like a crown,
And treat me like a king.

Reviews

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vowlvom

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I like the lead "guitar" work you've written here, the jangling arpeggio / riff starting at 0:37 in particular sounds really great. Great take on the title too. The vocal melody isn't one of your best though, and some of the rhythm in the lyrics is very strange to me - "my house keeps burning down, let's build another wing" sounds really good, but then "encircle this hill like a crown" collapses in on itself.

owl

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Ooh, the little riff on that guitarish thing in my right ear is really nice (I think that might be the same thing Vom mentioned). I liked the chorus melody… this does have a lot of execution issues with the vocals throughout, but I know what you were going for with the chorus, I think I do anyway, and I approve, it just needs a bit of polish and practice. I think the verse melody could probably use a bit more variation. I like the lyrical concept, although I think it needs more of an emotional core instead of the kind of Wikipedia dump of stuff from his life… the mass murder of his whole family and the multiple fires at Taliesin were terrifying and devastating, and these lyrics kind of just drop those events in there as a cool aside in the first verse and move on to his leaky roofs.

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