furrypedro
Forum postWeird. The guitar doesn't have enough going on to justify it being the only instrument you use other than the drums and vocals. The vocals are frequently annoying. The drums sound good though.
Entry from I Don't Want An Answer To That in Nur Ein VIII.
Incorporate a Songfight title meaningfully in the lyrics.
I Don't Want An Answer To That
by Sky Pup
The doctor looks at me and says:
Please insert your finger
Please insert your finger
Into the hole in the machine
It takes just one drop
One drop of blood
For the death machine to know your fate
But once again
I chicken out
And make my way back home
The latest innovation in medical technology
The Machine of Death
Gives a 100% accurate prediction of how someone will die
Using just a sample of their blood
I don't want an answer to that
Don't want to know
I don't want an answer to that
Don't care to know
But once again
I change my mind
And I pick up the phone
I'm on my way to the doctors now
The doctor looks at me and says:
Please insert your finger
Please insert your finger
Into the hole in the machine
It takes just one drop
One drop of blood
For the death machine to know your fate
So I place my finger on the needle
The doctor looks at me and says
The doctor looks at me and says
The doctor looks at me and says
The doctor looks at me and says
The doctor looks at me and says:
Hit by a train
Be careful with that
Weird. The guitar doesn't have enough going on to justify it being the only instrument you use other than the drums and vocals. The vocals are frequently annoying. The drums sound good though.
I've said "Spinal Tap" about a hundred times in talking about this song already, right? It's very Spinal Tap. I wish you had some better way to differentiate the characters in your song. The "PLEEEEZE inSERT your FINGER" voice is grating. I wish I could figure out why your guitars sounds like they were recorded inside a coffin… Oh, and your use of the titles was just dreadful. Your story is weird and original, and that just might be enough to keep you alive till next round. Keep your fingers crossed!