NUR EIN
almost 3 years agopassed
2:34
Sink or Swim
Lichen Throat image
Lichen Throat

Entry from Sink or Swim in Nur Ein XVIII.

Lyrics relate to the changing seasons.

LyricsShow lyrics

Sink or Swim
Lichen Throat

The sun is warm in the valley,
But the peaks are capped with snow.
Every morning I tally
Another day in the calendar row.
All the snow in the mountains
Will melt in the coming weeks;
Rivulets will flow like fountains
And water will rise in the creeks.
I got a brand new kayak,
And I’ve been practicing rolls
I’m memorizing aerial photos
Of all the rocks and shoals.

I’ve been watching the gage
At the Taos Junction Bridge.
I track the rising stage
And watch the snow melt off the ridge.
As early spring turns late,
It’ll be high enough to run.
This summer’s going to be great
And I can’t wait to have fun.
I got a plastic helmet
And a yellow PFD.
Time to grab my paddle
And put away my skis.

I slide into the water
At the upstream end of the gorge.
I’d better move like an otter
Because this stream’s too deep to ford.
At the class V rapids,
I’ll finally test my skills,
See if my practice habits
Are good enough not to get me killed.
I got a nervous feeling,
And the path ahead looks grim.
If this boat flips over
Will I sink or swim?

Reviews

2 posted notes

ujnhunter

Forum post

I liked how it started. The second/right channel part didn't match the initial part of the song. Your voice has gotten better, though I really need a melody, which I understand is hard, and especially with such busy left/right instrumental parts that don't really fit together all that well.

vowlvom

Forum post

this is solid, I like the way the chorus sections kick in with a little more intensity. Generally enjoyable but the rigid rhyme scheme and three very similar verse / chorus pairs left it feeling a little repetitive to me, even if the lyrics keep changing I'd like to have heard a little more variation in sonic palette / dynamics / melody.

Lichen Throat - Sink or Swim | Nur Ein