My first instinct is "Boring!" and by 1.15 my opinion isn't changing much. TBF, around 2.00, i'm getting a "you're winning me round" vibe, but this should be my sh*t and somehow it isn't. I cant quite explain why, and Im sorry about that.

I struggled with hearing the verse vocals on this song; it sounded like you mumbled your way through the verses and/or just mixed your voice too low for whatever reason. It's not as much of a problem when you raise your voice into the next octave up. I'd like to hear some different lyrics for that last verse instead of repeating the first verse. The idea in its present state is static; I'd like to see it develop. Have your character's feeling change or evolve over the course of the song; give us a feeling that something has occured or changed over the course of the song.

another vote for "glad to see you back, Third Cat"! This is smoothly, atmospherically arranged and the chorus is catchy, I'm surprised it didn't rank higher. The use of feedback delay is a clever (and fun) take on the challenge too.