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j$

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does a little robot dance I think the music could stand to be mixe dup to match the vocals. The vocals aren't too loud, they're just too dominant in the mix. I like the oscillators very much and the choppy rhtythms of the vocal make me do that pretending to be on eof the Kraftwerk Dummies arm thing. therefore this is good. Nice poppy weirdness which I love, as you know. Could do with a breakdown at about 1.45 just to drag you out and then back into the groove. Other than that I am happy.

jack

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haha, of course you would know how to make use of electronic claps. production is very solid. i dig the mix alot. this is almost upbeat for you 🙂

Reist

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Cool. Makes me want to do a dance. Kind of creepy though. It's probably just part of the style, but I'm not a huge fan of the effect on the voice. It's a good song though. I give it a 85%.

deshead

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It's like Skinny Puppy or early Ministry or some such. I'd like to hear the vocals a little clearer, but then, the piece does work as a whole. Maybe the lyrics aren't that important to it. Either way, I don't think you have anything to worry about.

Thornberry

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Pros I liked how you have seperate rhythem tracks in LR and middle
cons im sorry man, i just found this to be a little bland...didnt have much zest too it.
The Handclaps were: Well placed. Added to the song.
Summary You squeaked by, and I think you can, and think you will, do much better next time

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