Two things need to be said before I can get into issues of substance here. 1.) I don't see the relevance to the title. 2.) You took a prefabricated track and used it as your "guest rapper." Basically, rather than this being an original song, it's a remix. If I were judge, I'd want to disqualify you for that. But I'm not a judge, so we'll see what happens.

The bright-and-peppy synth track works oddly with the rap here. I'm not familiar with the original, but the brightness seems a little incongruent with the track. It's a cute beat, but its roughshodness clashes with the professional rapping. The lyrics work well when viewed through the lens of Songfight (especially the part about not caring about reviews and such).