Your voice here kind of reminds me of the way the guy from My Morning Jacket mumbles, I'm down with that, and I like the keys riff and those synth spazzes dotted throughout the 1st section. The second section is a bit more haphazard; I still like it but cracks start appearing. There's a couple of pops, the bass sounds a bit rumbly and at times I think the flange gets a bit too much for the guitar. very cool song though