Really interesting spacy arrangement, I particularly like the marimba (?) that comes in later on and the swell of strings after that. Some of the harmonies and vocal layers feel like they could use some work, where the timing or tuning between the two layers is just off enough to distract. But mostly I found this to be a really interesting composition.

These are really lovely lyrics, these collaborators you found have a way with words. And I really like your lyrical concept, although I don’t think I would have gotten that it was about the solstice or dislocation without you explaining that. I like that you’ve left a lot of space in this, although I found myself wanting more dynamics and a bigger build over the course of the song--it starts to feel very slow and very long after a while, and after the first chorus where you bring in the harmonies I was hoping you’d bring in a full drum kit there and launch into a higher-energy take on the remainder of the tune. It’s a cool arrangement, though, with the different layers coming in and interesting things with the panning and multiple vocals happening at once (those high held ones are nice), I’m just impatient. I would have liked some bigger jumps and variations in the melody as well--I feel like I’ve heard very similar melodies from some of your other songs, and this kind of hangs around in the same small range of notes and rhythms.