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almost 5 years agopassed
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Drag Me Around
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Nick Soma

Entry from Drag Me Around in Nur Ein XVI.

Song must bridge your Round 0 and Round 1 songs

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Nick Soma - Drag Me Around
SpoilerWarning: lengthy explanation follows.

So, I tried to meet the challenge in both a lyrical and musical way. First, the lyric. My Round 0 and Round 1 entries both have non-personal lyrics, and I decided that all three songs should have the same narrator, some guy named Karl, who has a slight obsession with semi-precious stones and frequently experiences pareidolia in an intense way. Karl's biggest fear is to be seen as weird, he just wants to be a regular normal guy which however, he obviously isn't. I wanted this song to have a central theme of its own, so I thought Karl might have some issues with sensory processing like I do - so this lyric is semi-autobiographical unlike the other two. To calm himself, Karl always keeps some gemstones in his pocket, but sometimes he forgets about that when under stress. The "healing touch" in the context of this song is, of course, not the touch of someone else, but Karl himself touching the stones.

Musically, I wanted this song to start out much like the first one and then gradually shift toward the sound of the second one via change in mood, instrumentation (note the organ in the last third) and modulation. It starts out in E minor with some borrowing from the harmonic minor as I did in my Round 0 entry, then later modulates to D major to fit the key of Pareidolia. The tempo is exactly halfway between my Round 0 and 1 entry. I reused some elements of both the other tracks: the drumbeat is the same as in Semiprecious, only changing in the last third; the bridge at "My shield has been destroyed..." is exactly the same as the prechorus of Pareidolia; the melody of the electric guitar in the final part is the same as the verses of Pareidolia; and the outro is meant to end the song just like my Pareidolia entry begins, with the same old nylon string guitar which BTW was my first guitar as a child, and the birdsong, emerging here from the hectic sound of cars passing, suggesting Karl has managed to flee the overwhelming situation.

I ought to go out in the sunshine
I've been hiding in here so long
A bit of social interaction
That's OK, what could go wrong?

A sunny day to spend
With my family and friends
Who drag me around
I just didn't know
How many places they would go
All the pictures and sounds...

I wonder now as I do sometimes
What it might feel like to them
I wish my sensory perception
Would never ever overload again

I'm just a zombie now
Mindlessly I tag along
As they drag me around
Faces flashing now
Messages in my head
Drowned in the sound

But in my pocket, I remember now
I got the medicine to calm me down
Pretty gemstones I love so much
I'm in desperate need of a healing touch

My shield has been destroyed
I blankly stare into the void

Breathe in, breathe out
Talisman, help me now
Here in my hands
A thousand colors dance
I'll be better once
I'm back home alone
Try to focus on
The patterns in these stones
I will be okay
When I'm home alone
Try to focus on
The faces in these stones

Reviews

2 posted notes

j$

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Nice atmosphere created by the first 15 seconds. Pretty good. Probably needs a more distinct chorus section but hey what would I know It develops nicely, though I am unsure if story of the words do.

JonPorobil

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In reviewing your "Pareidolia," I said this:
I was more right than I could have known. This challenge brought out the best in you. I hear the lyrical connection to both songs and the musical themes of both so clearly, only they've been improved upon here, possibly due to two weeks of getting more comfortable with the musical ideas. The pounding drums in the first half evoke your "Semiprecious," but with what feels like more confidence and purpose. When you get to "My shield's been destroyed / I blankly stare into the void," I had the briefest moment of "Where have I heard that progression before?" until it clicked that you were calling back to the prechorus of your "Pareidolia," slowed down and transposed a bit, but sounding almost iconic here. You did the best job with the challenge this round, in my opinion, and it resulted in a song brimming with urgency, purpose, story, and drama, buoyed by great performances and your best mix of the year so far. Sorry if I've been a bit tough on you so far this year, but welcome back to the top.

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