furrypedro
Forum postFinally, some fucking double-kick! Slightly too many syllables per line in the verse, that's probably my only criticism. I particularly like the slowing down of the tempo for some proper chugging.
Down to Under - Frankie Big Face
I don’t know even where to begin
Government scientists took me in
Took me underground—subterranean!
Put a circuit board just under my skin
Look in the mirror what do I see?
Another man’s eyes looking back at me!
Try to make a move to set myself free
Another man’s voice tells me who I should be!
(And I wanna be free)
Down from under
Lightning meets thunder
Penetrates my thoughts
Turns me into something that I’m not
Down to under
Help me get back
Down to under
Gotta slow down gotta put on the breaks
Gotta find the will to fix my mistakes
Gotta give more than the master takes
Gotta find this place for humanity’s sake
(Our lives are at stake)
Down from under
Lightning meets thunder
Penetrates my thoughts
Turns me into something that I’m not
Down to under
Help me get back
Down to under
I’ve got to get back
Down to under
Finally, some fucking double-kick! Slightly too many syllables per line in the verse, that's probably my only criticism. I particularly like the slowing down of the tempo for some proper chugging.