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Floating in the Water
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Stacking Theory

Entry from Floating in the Water in Nur Ein XVII.

Incorporate at least two different narratives from at least 500 years apart

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Floating in the Water - Stacking Theory

Liner:
SpoilerThis is a song about my island home - Australia

In the first narrative, I am telling the story of the Rainbow Serpent - a recurring indigenous Australian creation story.
In the second narrative, I am referencing Captain Cook and the First Fleet, who arrived on this land in 1770.
I think you'll be able to spot who is who in the song.

A few lyric-specific notes:
"Toorali-oorali-ay" is a reference to the Australian Folk song 'Botany Bay', which is associated with the deportation of convicts to Australia
The Red, Black, and Yellow that the Serpent leaves behind in this song are the colours of the Australian Aboriginal Flag
"Always was, always will be" is an important statement in our nation. The first footprints on this land belonged to our First Nations people, and sovereignty was never ceded.

in the beginning there was nothing
only me
the land was flat
and it was lonely
and empty.

this island floating in the water

I travelled everywhere
just looking
for my friends
I travelled north and south
I travelled east and west
(my body made the valleys)

on this island floating in the water

Today
Is the day
That I sail
‘round the cape
To stake
My claim
On this island floating in the water

I brought the frogs up from the earth
and kissed their bellies
(and they made the rivers run)
I turned the animals to women & men
and gave them their ease
(they were my precious ones)

On this island floating in the water

I came
And I saw
And I stayed
On this shore
I invade
Toorali-oolari-ay

this island floating in the water

I am the rainbow
and I’m living in the sky
(and if you look you’ll see me)
Red, black, and yellow
are the colours left behind
(always was and always will be)

this island floating in the water

always was and always will be
always was and always will be
always was and always will be
always was and always will be

Reviews

3 posted notes

Future Boy

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lead vocal seems to be off to the left a bit, which is strange. oh then it goes center when the distorted guitar comes in. you're making the lo-fi / phasing effect on the vocals work. love the chill drums, they sit really well in the mix. it's a good vibe.

glennny

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Great dynamics. From whispers to yelling. I love the quiet bits. The loud bits work for contrast but aren’t as strong. This song is great. Good concept. Well done!

furrypedro

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This is a great tune, but as Sailing Magpie pointed out to me, the verse is a rip-off of MGMT's "Time to Pretend" and it's difficult to unhear that once it's been pointed out. That aside, I love the vocal synthing and chilled beats in the verse and prechorus. The grungey switch up is dramatic and I guess it works, but the mellow bits are by far my favourite. Those tremolo swells of guitar are so dreamy.

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