I love the herky-jerky verses. And, like Balance Lost, it psyched me up for the big hooky chorus, but alas, it didn't come. The breakdown is nice and reignites the song, but then the chorus comes back and its a letdown for this reviewer. I would have just ridden that vocal breakdown part all the way into the sunset.

right away i love the music. Heavy and interesting. Different for you. Good rhymes too. Hmm some of the lines don’t scan right, though.

Dirty synths, very 8-bit retro here on the drums and instrumentation. A Glenny without guitar? Oh there it is, spanky and grimey, and comes back for the rest of the track. Dark ominous vibe in this, I like the music. Really dig the groove and the music; particularly when the bass comes in around the 3 of clubs bit. Fun lyrics centered around the deck of cards itself, I enjoyed that bit in the chorus. Overall take on a charlatan pitching snake oil in the lyrics I think works for the song.
For constructives, I think I only really have two; first the line "I see through your transparency" lands a little awkward with me; since if it's transparent, you can already see through it, it feels like a bit of an awkward phrasing, and it hits three times for the chorus. Second I'd say that relative to all of the other entries, the breakdown did not stand out as much or stick with me very much, even compared to your other one with the Cavedwellers breakdown (which I liked a lot and can still imagine while sitting here). Cool tune.

Kudos for taking me by surprise; electroclash wasn't what I was expecting from you, so well done for keeping us on our toes. I like when the first guitar comes in and the level of distortion fits perfectly with the electronic backdrop. In fact, the mix is one of the most impressive things about this, how you've fit various unusual elements together into one seamless whole. I like the song as it's playing, but it feels like it's missing a good hook. Even after a few listens I struggle to recall any refrains or lyrics (other than the title) once it's over.