NUR EIN
about 7 years agopassed
2:48
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Entry from Message Received in Nur Ein XIV.

Use of spelling in a song.

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This song is based on a rap verse added to a song that was already kinda hokey causing me to change the radio station in my car for the first time in 5 months. Like the song existed without a rap verse for a long time and all the sudden now there's a rap verse added in after the fact.

soft swallows
a timid voice she shows
she wallows
the world around her knows

it's not going anywhere
it's a vomit pending stare
there's a echo over there
don't you know

can't you read what is written?

It's hollow
have you never seen a plan
so follow
it'll happen in the end

I don't have time for silly games
I'm not even done with James
he's my favorite but I'll never let him go
don't you know?

For the lives we know x3
let it go

1 2 3 4
rap verse here it is
take a song and put it in
make it sorta like the verse
except it sounds just so much worse
S P elling B
is what my agent said to me
I can see that W E
will make some M O uhnuh E
I have feelings on this topic
let me M pha S I Z
Taking P O P and rapping
makes me want to D I E
put it in your pipe and smoke it
have a S O N G fight
Just don't ruin my rad E O
that is all, shut up good night

Reviews

3 posted notes

thirdcatmusic

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pretty strong performance with the singing & guitar, I like the g & g part. the rap bit is silly. overall not a favorite for me.

vowlvom

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I don't share your disdain for rap verses and so your rap verse just came across as really sneery and unpleasant. The song up to that point is well done but suffers in comparison to the rich and layered productions found elsewhere.

Cybronica

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I like the echo thingy going there, and the harmonies. The song part is lovely. I agree with the sentiment of the song- random rap breaks are jarring. The rap itself sounded belabored, but maybe that’s the point?

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