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NovelNur Ein XVII
almost 4 years agoshadow
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Novel
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Entry from Novel in Nur Ein XVII.

Create samples from a non-musical recording and make them integral to the song

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Novel by Rattlebox
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Snare: contact mic, tapping on laptop
Rhythm: contact mics on metal bowl, light bulb, aluminum foil through distortion pedal
Field Recording: M & A Krieger during a card game*
SpoilerI actually don't think this is a well-written song, and of all the songs I've submitted so far it's the least melodically developed, but it's all I have time for this week. It has a nice atmosphere. The pedal steel guitars are also a field recording that I had on file previously. The sample of my daughters is from a "sample bank" that I use for my sound collage project. All the other samples were made for this song.

It’s a novel with everything
It’s got a night where it blew apart
A time bomb restless heart
And a man’s mistake

It’s a novel with everything
It’s got a lawyer just for the kids
It’s got everything we said and did
On dark display

I keep turning the pages
Hoping everything will be alright
But it’s crumbling before my eyes
And I’m waiting for the final chapter

It’s a novel with everything
It’s got the greatest love I’ve ever known
It’s got a letter left outside my home
With no kiss goodbye

All the damage and all the sting
All the promises dead and done
All the feelings left behind the sun
As the moon flew by

I keep turning the pages
Hoping everything will be alright
But it’s crumbling before my eyes
And I’m waiting for the final chapter

Amazing, shitty, and chill
Amazing, shitty, and chill

Reviews

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vowlvom

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the sample that opens this is a total 100% delight and I love that you reference back to it in the chorus. The guitars sound AMAZING, you're so good at fuzz. The song itself isn't my favourite of your submissions this NE, I'm more into the powerpop melodies than this kind of stompy hard rock I think, but it's solidly well done.

mo

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I really like this song when it starts out, but I feel like the fuzz guitar is just a little oppressive all the time, and might usefully drop out during verses or something, or maybe it's a mix thing, but hearing that super compressed bass heavy tone for so long without a break is tough for me, YMMV. Strong energy, that makes up somewhat for roughness of intonation in the harmony vocal, good work!

sailingmagpie

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Love the opening sample and how you quote it later on. Not sure that makes it integral but you're not being judged, so who cares. The guitars feel like they're about to rip my face off (in a good way!) and this reminds me of a heavier version of Big Star.

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