grumpymike
Forum postIt's solid and has a good start. I like the guitar noodles. The chorus is not something I want to hear more than once, which is a bad feature for a chorus. The later choruses get better.
Entry from Is This A Joke To You? in Nur Ein XIX.
Lyrics must contain a joke with a punchline
Is This a Joke To You
Berkeley Social Scene
I’ve been standing up here for so long
Sweat pouring down, my mind now totally gone
Words coming out, but coming out all wrong
I’m up here bombing
Did you hear about the punk rock nun?
The Sex Pistols were her number one
Not their lyrics or the songs that they have sung
But their label was Virgin
Silence
I shouldn’t have to ask
Just trying to make you laugh
I shouldn’t have to ask
But is this a joke to you?
A marathon 10 minutes I have spent
To get this crowd moving but they won’t relent
I bought this life but now I want to rent
I’m up here now dying
Did you hear about the rabbit that
Did magic in the back of a laundromat
He tried to pull himself out of a hat
But his pods were Tide
Silence
I shouldn’t have to ask
Just trying to make you laugh
I shouldn’t have to ask
But is this a joke to you?
I never had an audience that completely stripped my pride
Gonna be funny when I look back on this and wish that I survived
I shouldn’t have to ask
Just trying to make you laugh
I shouldn’t have to ask
But is this a joke to you?
I shouldn’t have to ask
Just trying to make you laugh
I shouldn’t have to ask
But is this a joke to you?
Is this a joke?
It's solid and has a good start. I like the guitar noodles. The chorus is not something I want to hear more than once, which is a bad feature for a chorus. The later choruses get better.