This is fantastic!! Do this more!!! Maybe Skub inspired you last round? 😉 When the chorus comes, it feels very much like Garbage. There is too much to like about this to list, so let's just skip to the nitpicks!!! The "take me home..." repeating at the end is the weakest non-technical part, in that I don't feel the energy they should be conveying. After all that build up, Erin, sing raunchier! Challenge-wise, adding ", so" doesn't make it legit one sentence, but a lot of people did that so you're not alone, and the lyrics are an effective attempt. The mix is good, but the mastering/EQ could use some love - I feel like you're missing a lot of sparkle overall - possibly just a treble boost on the whole thing; the bass is a little muddy; the drums are a little dull - they're nested like a song where they aren't supposed to be the most prominent feature. To mansplain, I would probably start with cleaning up the bass EQ to give it enough jazz without muddying the song - roll off the bass more, then maybe bump in the upper mids; then, maybe the drums could just come up a smidge, or just have some mids to highs poked - the cymbals probably don't need to come up, just the snare and kick, but maybe this all could be accomplished by adjusting the master bus because the mix itself is fine. See this song: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=8jL2DPylmhE

Amazed at your ability to craft a song thus far in the contest. Not thrilled with the run on sentence as it doesn’t even read well for a run on. Can’t knock you much for that considering a lot of people ended up in the same boat. But it’s the only negative thing I can think of. Was a pleasure to listen to.