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Inflatable Vegetables
Million WattsNur Ein XI
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Inflatable Vegetables

Entry from Million Watts in Nur Ein XI.

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FIFTY ONE MILLION WATTS – inflatable vegetables

Thirty one white giants
Climb into the mists of Hana`ula
Wave their long arms
Try to catch the wind

Red eyes glowing brightly
Warning unsuspecting flying islands
Don’t you soar low
Or we will chop you up

I am sprinting down rocky paths
Through pastures of yellow grass
Racing the setting sun

Kaheawa
I’m stuck out here in the starlight
Hiking on a jagged lava trail
Without a flashlight

You’ve got fifty one million watts
Trapped in battered metal boxes
Fifty one million watts but you won’t share
Do you even care?

Traffic far below me
Insects on a quest for teriyaki
Climb down slowly
Shouldn’t hike alone

Suffer cuts and bruises
Try to pick my way through the kiawe
One more mile
Then biking quickly home

Caught up in harsh sun-baked beauty
Don’t give myself enough time to descend
Stumble down unstable paths

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SOLO

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You don't even care.

FYI: Kaheawa is a wind farm that cuts through the middle of one of my favorite hiking trails. I have been caught up there after sunset at least 3 times so that's a flaw in judgment.
Also, one million watts is called a megawatt, so that's two flaws right there 🙂
Mokulele - the word for airplane is literally "flying island". Kiawe is a thorny tree, like mesquite or acacia.

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noma

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Composition: 9/10
Lyrics: 8/10
Performance: 10/10
Production: 9/10

Creativity bonus: 5
Challenge bonus: 1

Huh? This ain't iVeg, is it? So different from your usual work. To be honest, I can't really find any obvious flaw here except for the clipping... which saves you from zero or negative challenge bonus points 😉 apart from that, there is not much to criticize. It's a cool track. The unexpected genre, and the brilliant key change in the chorus earn you 5 creativity bonus points. Looking forward to your psychedelic entry next week.

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